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Friday, October 26, 2018

free writing

Hello, bloggers today I'm going to be telling you about my free writing. Just let you know I haven't Finished it yet but It still is going to be good.

Once upon a time, There was this sheep called Bennett that has always wanted to fly. He always wanted to fly so he could see everything In the whole wide world,well at least he thought he could see the whole world in his mind. But the other sheep thought flying was a dumb idea because it was a myth for sheep to fly. But he didn’t care what the other sheep thought. When it was time for bed bennet sneaked out of his cabin went to a scientist hide and asked him how to make himself fly.

I hope you enjoyed my blog my next blog will probably be about me finishing this story see you later

2 comments:

  1. hi louis I like the way that you made a lame fly up into the sky.

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  2. Hi my name is Thomas and Shayden from kawakawa primary school I like the way You enjoy free write really enjoyable your next step is to put something else apart from lots blogs stop.

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