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Thursday, September 28, 2017

Darth Vader's Dream Car

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Darth vader, like every other villain, had hobbies. Yes, he obviously liked lightsabers and flying around space at catastrophic speeds. He was also fond of trying to eliminate Jedi. However, Darth had a need for speed, and loved nothing more than cruising around in his favourite sports car.He loved the slick, black tyres, the feeling in the pit of his stomach as he accelerated to great speed along a straight stretch of road. He really could forget all about his troubles, especially those pesky Jedi!
This was his time to relax. Was it all about to change? Yes the jedi came to darth vader's house.The jedi's didn't even know that it has darth vader's house they only came to this house because he was really rich.and the house looked rich as well,darth vader saw the jedi’s and started fighting the jedi’s.
Darth vader noticed that he could just escape in his sports car.but the jedi’s kept on fighting him but he escaped in time to find somewhere safe.he saw a old house that no one rented or owned he went inside the house.and again he saw the jedi’s and he started fighting them again.in all of a sudden one of the jedi’s killed darth vader.and darth vader died.

7 comments:

  1. Hi Louis,
    I love this piece of writing, and the words you used.
    My favourite sentence in this writing is when you say: "Yes, he obviously liked lightsabers and flying around space at catastrophic speeds.".

    Thanks,
    Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.

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  2. Wow I like it but itś a bit deadly can you change the end of the story

    Thanks
    Kade

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    1. i couldn't think of anything else for the ending sorry

      Thanks anyway
      Louis

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  3. hi i love dark vaders car i also like your writing is that you riding the car?you should change the end also.

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    1. I said this to one of my friends as well, I couldn't think of another ending

      Thanks Anyway
      Louis

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