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Thursday, March 15, 2018

lego cave

Once on a rainy day i was with dad at the shop until i saw a lego cave. i could tell because it had a sign that said the lego cave so before i went in there i told dad can i go in the lego cave he replied fine but you have to be back until 5:40 because that's the time we should be home said dad. So i went into the lego cave and i saw a million sets of lego ninjago i was amazed i picked up heps of the lego sets and then saw a forbittin lego set it was shining with gold so i picked it up off the ground and it gave me heaps of money.after that i ran back to dad with heaps of we were jumping up and down and smiling we were so happy ran to find mum and ariana we were smling the end.

2 comments:

  1. Louis, I suspect that you like LEGO. How amazing it would be to discover a LEGO cave. It would be even more amazing to discover golden LEGO. I wonder if all LEGO was golden if people would tidy it up more carefully?

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Hi Louis I think that you did a good job explaining how much you like lego but I think that you can have a bit more full stops and make more sense.

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