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Friday, August 11, 2017

My Spy Fox Writing Piece


Spy Fox!

It was a dark and stormy night on Lilac dr hamer had his evil plan to set on spy fox. He had a laser to chop him in half. And a knife to cut his head of so dr hamer opened his shed and got into his flying car and flyed away to find spy fox. Spy fox had some guns and some swords to chop and shoot him. So he went into his flying car to find dr hamer and dr hamer saw spy fox so he went after him and then spy fox turned around in his flying car and then chopped his head of but dr hamer didn't die so they fighted and fighted and fighted and dr hamer just flyed away. So he went after him but a space ship hit spy fox but spy fox wasen hurt. So he kept chasing dr hamer dr hamer got back to his house to get his troopers to help him kill spy fox. And spy fox got to dr hamer's house dr hamer told his troopers to fight spy fox. spy fox got his gun out and shooted dr hamer's troopers. Dr hamer help his troopers to fight spy fox. Spy fox got his swords out chop dr hamer's troopers. Some of his troopers died some of his troopers didn't die. Dr hamer just flyed away so his troopers could fight for him. It was no use because the sardines were not strong enough. Because spy fox was way stronger and dr hamer came back to try fight him.

2 comments:

  1. that was a lote mister

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